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Just how to showcase a crying/sad scene without using sentimentalism?

Just how to showcase a crying/sad scene without using sentimentalism? Earlier, I'd no trouble in showing a scene like this, and as in my situation, showing a crying world I would compose something similar to "next a teardrop folded by the girl cheek". However, I got look over an article from a respectable publisher (I can't bear in mind who) stating exactly how sentimentalism try detrimental to a story, and used as an example a crying world, and asserted that...

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